Memento Mori

It's very enjoyable. Just make sure that when you post the story itself, don't make it too long, or it will drag on. Stories like these are best kept short, ...

It sounds intriguing. You might have wanted to give us an idea of what the plot was like, though.

It's really good. I'd read the next chapter if I find it, definitely. I found it amusing. If it wasn't supposed to be amusing then your story gave off the ...